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January 08, 2007

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toadman

Good tension building, not overdone. Lots of mystery as well, with some other hints at a possible outcome, maybe..but we'll see. Keep it up. It's very fluid.

Talena

My only complaint is that each section is so darn short!

I know, I know...what do I expect of you, one person, in one day, who has to do this on his lunch break?

Sorry. Carry on. I'll be reading. (I'll even try to be patient!)

Happy Monday Tuesday!

peefer

Scott, I just started reading these, and damn! I realise I'm so far behind. Believe you me, I'll catch up. This is a good story so far.

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later. love.